From c2eb89d52da3a50f5294dbab710e13dfa0c08306 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dante Catalfamo
Date: Mon, 12 Apr 2021 12:44:09 -0400
Subject: freecad-got: clean up sentences even more

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 content/posts/WIP-freecad-and-git/index.org | 15 ++++++++-------
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diff --git a/content/posts/WIP-freecad-and-git/index.org b/content/posts/WIP-freecad-and-git/index.org
index a818a32..32849b2 100644
--- a/content/posts/WIP-freecad-and-git/index.org
+++ b/content/posts/WIP-freecad-and-git/index.org
@@ -8,16 +8,17 @@
 #+SUMMARY:
 
 I've been working a lot with [[https://freecadweb.org/][FreeCAD]] recently since I got my 3D
-printer. It's been a mostly excellent experience, but I've run into my
-fair share issues.
+printer. It's been a mostly excellent experience, but I've run a
+couple issues.
 
 Between the MacOS version and Linux version of FreeCAD (both 0.19,
-maybe different builds?), a project that I've been working on for a
-couple days has become broken to the point where I can no longer
-edit the sketches, rendering it useless.
+maybe different builds?), and transferring files between machines
+using Nextcloud, a project that I'd been working on for a couple days
+become broken to the point where I can no longer modify the sketches,
+rendering it useless.
 
-This has led me on a quest to find out how I can manage these files
-through version control like =git=.
+This has led me to find out how I can manage these files through
+version control like =git=.
 
 It would seem that FreeCAD files are nothing more than zip files
 containing text documents, which should make this rather easy.
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