From 82248eed2713e1623f47cc04681b8873af6c18fc Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dante Catalfamo
Date: Sun, 30 May 2021 16:51:51 -0400
Subject: bsd-auth: more wording

---
 content/posts/WIP-how-bsd-authentication-works/index.org | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'content/posts/WIP-how-bsd-authentication-works/index.org')

diff --git a/content/posts/WIP-how-bsd-authentication-works/index.org b/content/posts/WIP-how-bsd-authentication-works/index.org
index b99232f..46387c4 100644
--- a/content/posts/WIP-how-bsd-authentication-works/index.org
+++ b/content/posts/WIP-how-bsd-authentication-works/index.org
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   :END:
 
   OpenBSD is quite different from many other Unix-like operating
-  systems in many ways, but one way which I find interesting is the
+  systems in several ways. One which I find interesting is the
   authentication system. Most systems from AIX, Solaris, and Linux to
   other BSDs including MacOS use some form of a system called
   [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pluggable_authentication_module][Pluggable Authentication Module]] (PAM). The two main implementations
@@ -52,7 +52,8 @@
   :CUSTOM_ID: why
   :END:
 
-  I was curious about how the internals of BSD Auth worked, and I
+  There isn't much on the internet about how to use BSD
+  Authentication. I was curious about how the internals worked, and I
   figured someone else might be too :-).
 
 * Documentation
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