From ed88b9169887eea646e14ff47a91c06fa02112a3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dante Catalfamo
Date: Sat, 25 Jul 2020 03:19:10 -0400
Subject: rakudo-star: more post improvements

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 content/posts/openbsd-compiling-rakudo-star/index.org | 13 ++++++-------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

(limited to 'content/posts')

diff --git a/content/posts/openbsd-compiling-rakudo-star/index.org b/content/posts/openbsd-compiling-rakudo-star/index.org
index 6ab16b9..dd5133b 100644
--- a/content/posts/openbsd-compiling-rakudo-star/index.org
+++ b/content/posts/openbsd-compiling-rakudo-star/index.org
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@ I really enjoy using [[https://raku.org/][raku]] to write small scripts for syst
 maintenance and text parsing. Its regex and grammar engine are next
 level. The problem with using it on OpenBSD is that the packaged
 version is a couple years out of date. The version in ports is from
-2018, which contains a big regarding to nativecall on OpenBSD. Not
-to mention it's missing a lot of performance gains and patches.
+2018, which contains a bug regarding NativeCall on OpenBSD. Not to
+mention it's missing a lot of performance gains and patches.
 
 Instead of just compiling everything from source and installing them
 myself as I did on my last system, I installed it using the [[https://github.com/rakudo/star][rakudo
@@ -20,22 +20,21 @@ star]] distribution and its =rstar= command. Rakudo Star is raku plus
 some community modules and the =zef= package manager. It also comes
 with the =rstar= command, which helps you in the build process.
 
-Unfortunately, the first thing I had to do was install =bash=. as that
+Unfortunately, the first thing I had to do was install =bash=, as that
 is what the =rstar= command is written in.
 
 #+BEGIN_SRC shell
 doas pkg_add bash
 #+END_SRC
 
-
 After installing =bash=, I came across a problem. Running =rstar
 fetch= fetches all of the materials required to compile and assemble
 the star distribution, and while all of the community modules were
 successfully retrieved using =git=, it failed to pull in all 3 major
 source components. =MoarVM=, =nqp=, and =rakudo=, are pulled in as
-gzipped tarballs, each of them failing to download correctly, which I
-suspect is down to an issue with the bash scripts. Tar also throws a
-warning about one of its arguments, which I suspect has to do with the
+gzipped tarballs, each of them failing to download correctly. I
+suspect it's an issue with something in the bash scripts. Tar also
+throws a warning about one of its arguments, which has to do with the
 script using a GNU tar specific command.
 
 #+BEGIN_SRC
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