Better wording

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/content/posts/WIP-openbsd-dhcp-server/index.org b/content/posts/WIP-openbsd-dhcp-server/index.org
index 07296cd..d4c9e72 100644
--- a/content/posts/WIP-openbsd-dhcp-server/index.org
+++ b/content/posts/WIP-openbsd-dhcp-server/index.org
@@ -9,11 +9,9 @@
 
 [[https://www.openbsd.org/faq/faq4.html#Download][OpenBSD]] makes a great router. It's simplicity and ease of
 configuration makes it perfect for network infrastructure
-applications. On top of that, everything you could possibly need to
-build a network of any size is built into the base system, plus its
-man pages and examples cover everything you'd need to know. You can
-easily configure most everything on the system without having to ever
-look it up online.
+applications. Everything you need to build a network
+of any size is built into the base system, plus its man pages and
+examples cover everything you'd need to know.
 
 While I've been an OpenBSD user for years, I'm finally in the process
 of replacing the router provided by my ISP with a [[{{< ref "pcengines-comparison" >}}][PC Engines APU2E4]]
@@ -110,7 +108,7 @@ subnet 192.168.0.0 netmask 255.255.255.0 {
 }
 #+END_SRC
 
-and put the subnet-specific configuration inside the braces. You may
+The subnet-specific configuration goes inside the braces. You may
 specify as many subnets as you need in the configuration file,
 although for a home network like this I only need one.
 
@@ -147,12 +145,14 @@ host example-static-client {
 }
 #+END_SRC
 
-To run the DHCP server, we first enable, then start it using =rcctl=.
+To run the DHCP server, I first enable, then start it using =rcctl=.
 
 #+BEGIN_SRC
 doas rcctl enable dhcpd
 doas rcctl start dhcpd
 #+END_SRC
 
-To check the leases the =dhcpd= is currently holding, you can check
-out =/var/db/dhcpd.leases=.
+To see the leases the =dhcpd= is currently holding, you can check
+=/var/db/dhcpd.leases=.
+
+If you followed along these steps, you not have a running DHCP sever!