gateway: work on wording

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/content/posts/openbsd-vpn-gateway/index.org b/content/posts/openbsd-vpn-gateway/index.org
index fb12b70..e3d92d0 100644
--- a/content/posts/openbsd-vpn-gateway/index.org
+++ b/content/posts/openbsd-vpn-gateway/index.org
@@ -110,7 +110,6 @@
   :   inet 192.168.0.11 netmask 0xffffff00 broadcast 192.168.0.255
 
 
-
 * Configuring OpenVPN
 
 ** Installation
@@ -132,17 +131,19 @@
 
    Let's assume the VPN profile we've downloaded from our provider
    exists in =/root/profile.ovpn=. This could have been downloaded
-   using [[https://man.openbsd.org/man1/ftp.1][=ftp(1)=]] or transferred on using [[https://man.openbsd.org/man1/sftp.1][=sftp(1)=]]. It also requires a
-   username and password supplied by the user. Let's say that username
-   is =user@example.com= and the password is =password=.
+   using [[https://man.openbsd.org/man1/ftp.1][=ftp(1)=]] or transferred on using [[https://man.openbsd.org/man1/sftp.1][=sftp(1)=]]. Let's say it also
+   requires a username and password supplied by the user, as most
+   commercial VPN providers authenticate users in this way. For this
+   example, the username is =user@example.com= and the password is
+   =password=.
 
    To allow OpenVPN to login to the VPN without the us having to enter
-   our password, we can add the =auth-user-pass= configuration option
-   to our =ovpn= file. This will allow us run OpenVPN as a daemon, and
+   our password, we can add the =auth-user-pass= directive to our
+   =.ovpn= file. This will allow us run OpenVPN as a daemon, and
    restart it without having to type our username and password in.
 
    To do this we can create a file called =/root/vpnpasswd.txt= containing
-   our username, followed my our password on separate lines.
+   our username, followed my our password on a separate line.
 
    #+BEGIN_SRC
    user@examples.com