agenda e-ink: More modifications for e-ink

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/content/posts/org-agenda-eink/index.org b/content/posts/org-agenda-eink/index.org
index 601fabe..8dfd1e0 100644
--- a/content/posts/org-agenda-eink/index.org
+++ b/content/posts/org-agenda-eink/index.org
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ on [[https://www.crowdsupply.com/e-radionica/inkplate-6][Crowd Supply]], with th
 this.
 
 At the core of the Inkplate 6 is the [[https://www.espressif.com/en/products/socs/esp32][ESP32]]. An [[https://www.arduino.cc/][Arduino]]-compatible
-micro-controller which has integrated Bluetooth and WiFi. It draws
+micro-controller with integrated Bluetooth and WiFi. It draws
 very little power, which makes it ideal for something like this, as I
 leave on 24/7. It also has the benefit of being able to pull from the
 Arduino community, benefiting from the many libraries people have
@@ -40,24 +40,18 @@ in the export. It would look like
 =[[https://example.com][Description]]= instead of =Description=, which
 would be quite ugly and takes up a lot of horizontal space.
 
-This project been hugely beneficial for me. First and foremost, I can
-check my org agenda without even turning on my computer. It's always
-on, so I can check it out any time without having to open either a new
-tab in my browser or Emacs.
+This project been hugely beneficial for me. Mostly because I can check
+my org agenda without even turning on my computer. Even with my PC on,
+I can look at it any time without having to open either a new tab in
+my browser or Emacs.
 
-Being an eink display is very important, as it's not bright and
-distracting, and doesn't need to be turned off at night. It sort of
-just looks like any other appliance.
+Being an e-ink display, it's also not bright and distracting, and
+doesn't need to be turned off at night. It sort of just looks like any
+other appliance.
 
-Between this desk version of the org agenda and the new tab version,
+Between this e-ink version of the org agenda and the new tab version,
 my usage of the org agenda has gone up substantially. I used to use
 org for a handful of tasks, but moved over to regular calendar apps
 for most things, as they were simply more accessible in many
 situations. Now that I have this e-ink version of the org agenda, I
 find myself using it for almost everything.
-
-This really highlights the extreme versatility of Emacs and Org.
-While I had to figure out how to make it work, it took very little
-modification to Emacs in order to get it to work, and those
-modifications I did have to make were all easily accomplished by
-changing a couple variables or writing a little elisp.